Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since the dawn of humanity, the importance of living place has heated debates among people, and the controversial question of whether families live in cities or countrysides has always been taken into consideration. Although some people are inclined towards this idea that the best place for living is the quiet and uncrowded one, As far as I’m concerned the advantages of a big city life outweigh those of the country life. In the following essay. I will elaborate on my point of view through two remarkable reasons.
To begin with, the most significant reason is that no one cast the shadow of doubt on the fact that in this competitive and progressive world where we live, technology plays a pivotal role in many aspects of human life. Admittedly, having access to state-of-art facilities can pave the way for the upbringing of children, and they have great opportunities to boost their potential abilities. For example, there are many gyms around cities for different types of sports which, by attending, children can find their talents and make a progress in their life. On the other hand, the lack of recreational equipment and advanced technology harm rural people, and their children have no chance to flourish and make a breakthrough in their life.
Furthermore, no one can deny the impact of living places on human beings’ health. It is axiomatic fact that the city has a high level of hygiene in comparison with the country. Thanks to the revolution of science in all subject areas, in medicine, in particular, there is a plentiful number of experienced doctors who can cure many dangerous diseases. Nowadays, all of the big cities are taking advantage of advanced and fully equipped hospitals and health centers that provide various services for people. on the contrary, countryside families are suffering from a lack of doctors and appropriate medical service, which cause many problems to their health.
In conclusion, based on all the aforementioned reasons, I strongly hold the opinion that cities are a better site to live compared with rural, because towns not only provide suitable conditions for children to grow and find their ability, but cities also have a huge number of doctors and hospitals which is essential of everyone’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...hildren can find their talents and make a progress in their life. On the other hand, the l...
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...at provide various services for people. on the contrary, countryside families are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in particular, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 373.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07238605898 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81599114898 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573726541555 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 419.366225166 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3436006789 49.2860985944 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143901286703 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459702463995 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450548840019 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096175608825 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414759114882 0.0443174109184 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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