Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Using animals in drugs Experiment really is sadly dilemma. The vast majority of drugs Experiments depend on animals to major the consciousness of these drugs. There are variety of people which are Separated, first said say animals suffers, Tortures and dies. And the other said say that’s for humans health.
To figure out the truth you have to ask the specialists. Actually the Scientists were so honest in this case. Unfortunately, There is a huge harm to animals but we need them for humans live ; it help us to improve the drugs and create a new Treatments. For example Insulin that saved millions of lives, it couldn’t happened without using dog’s pancreas.
There is no other choice to do, the animals and human organs are so complex.
As Experiment on animals has meny benefits and advantages,it also has a disadvantages and there are other solutions. It's so sad to see dogs, monkeys and mice Suffer and you complete in doing this. They could kill 100s of drugs in one test, which is Tragedy; Additionally they could make them fast for a day to inject them by a disease.
Anyway, this problem will continue, Experiments still exist and animals safer. In my opinion we could use it just in needs and we mast have Strict rules to protect animals live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, first, really, so, still, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62339679496 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3383673015 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.7857142857 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164437684412 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563343516174 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456471912884 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854561761745 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360603475782 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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