Nowadays, Many animal lovers claim that keeping animals captive in zoos is cruel and zoos should be banned to stop cruelty against animals. On the other hand many believe keeping animals in zoo can protect endangered species from extiction.Although I find both ideas reasonable I believe governments should shut zoos down.
To commence with, the deffenders of keeping animals in zoo believe that many endangered and threatend species can be preserved by being under provision and captive breeding . Protecting animals from extinction is of great importance as loosing any kind of animal means loosing them for good. Extinction of even one species can spell disaster on whole ecosystem.Among the most famous species driven to extinction by human is kind of bird named Dodo.
On the other hand many thinks that keeping animals in cage away from their natural habitant is brutal. wild life parks keeps animals for profit and it is not possible to insure they keep them in good condition. No matther how dedicated a zoo is they can not meet space requirements for most of their animals like lion and elephant. Their life in captivity can be harsh when animals are taken to the countries that do not have any similarity with animal natural habitant.
To conclude, the idea of conserving animals that are at risk of going extinct is a great one, but the problem is that not most zoos live up to it. Most zoos don’t focus on the educational aspect of zoos and the animals are mainly kept for benefit. So better that governments take responsibilty of protecting endangered species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98490566038 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72150592389 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8446706926 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251063592825 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115550866336 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747230236662 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17196545078 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757407482321 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.