Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, scientific researches are increasing widely to cope up with the new diseases which the world face every day. These researches require models to test and animals are used frequently to check these researches. This essay will discuss why animals should be used in testing new drugs and procedures.
First, using animals opens a gate for scientists To learn about human body; they are the only alternative that has a whole body system related to humans. Animals share most of the features with humans.
Second, animals should be used in laboratory experiments to prove the value of any new drug with the least damage. Since animals share a similar body system to humans, they are the perfect candidates for this mission. So, testing the side effects of a new drug on animals is sort of stimulation of humans reaction.
To put it in a nutshell, science is developing day after day to find new cures for different diseases and in order to ensure the safety of these cures using animals is essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89534883721 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53437694956 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6744539785 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245273642863 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110640279116 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831235891005 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146492544067 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748123066072 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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