In this question learners were asked to discuss why people travel more these days and to think about the benefits of travel.
In this comtemporary era, traveling has risen these days as compared to past times due to techonology advancement as well as people are also travel more and more one country to another for innumerable purposes such as business, trade, education and job opportunites. Moreover, it also has various advantages.
Nowadays, masses are prefer to travel one region to another for different kind of aims like education, trade, buisness and so on. To explicate it, majority of youngsters more likely to be travel to obtain higher education as well as seeking job opportunities. To epitome, some countries are lack in to provide high level learning to thier children, so pupils have to go on another regions for completing their higher education. Futhermore, a bit of people prefer to travelling for their business deals in other countries. Therfore, these are reasons behing why individuals touring more these days.
Although, people travel for their own purposes, they can get a lot of benefits from it. To elucidate it, firstly, when masses are travel in anonther states, then they can enjoy distinct type of traditional meals and also other reginoal activities can be enjoyed by them. Secondly, they can acquire knowledge about other cultures by touring one country to another. Not only residents can obtain advantages from travelling, but government also can get numerous benefits from it such as tourism contribute in the economy of the country. If regimes would allows to surge tourism industry it their own region, then they can raise economy of their tertiory. Hence, these are the benefits of the travel.
To conculde, individual are prefer to travel one country to another according to their choice, travelling also brings with a lot of advantages for both poeple and authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...ous advantages. Nowadays, masses are prefer to travel one region to another for dif...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'travel'?
Suggestion: travel
.... Futhermore, a bit of people prefer to travelling for their business deals in other count...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
...conomy of the country. If regimes would allows to surge tourism industry it their own ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'surging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: surging
...of the country. If regimes would allows to surge tourism industry it their own region, t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
... travel. To conculde, individual are prefer to travel one country to another accord...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20069204152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78321600884 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2101066938 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244671007204 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100484428288 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954348638338 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158182142728 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469542076885 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...ous advantages. Nowadays, masses are prefer to travel one region to another for dif...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'travel'?
Suggestion: travel
.... Futhermore, a bit of people prefer to travelling for their business deals in other count...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
...conomy of the country. If regimes would allows to surge tourism industry it their own ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'surging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: surging
...of the country. If regimes would allows to surge tourism industry it their own region, t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
... travel. To conculde, individual are prefer to travel one country to another accord...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20069204152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78321600884 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2101066938 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244671007204 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100484428288 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954348638338 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158182142728 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469542076885 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.