Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people.
What do you think about this viewpoint?
As international travel becomes the major form of enjoy one’s holiday. Selection of shelter in those days is of concern to many. Some people argue that staying in hotels may prevent people from understanding the local culture. I believe that this argument is not well grounded as merits of living in hotel for several days would overshadow other kinds of accommodation.
Hotel enables tourists with thorough and comfortable experience when visiting another nations. This is especially true of people who want to enjoy climates different from where they inhabit. To illustrate, Russian often flock to Viet Nam in winter season not only to avoid their chilling winter but to enjoy the tropical warmth and coziness in Viet Nam, which may be hard to find in their motherland. Besides, booking hotels becomes easy and convenient than ever thanks to the development of technology. Before the advent of travel apps such as Agoda or Booking.com, to reserve a hotel room is significantly difficult. That is why the utilization of hotel is more prevalent then its counterparts of accommodation.
Another justification upholding staying in hotel is that contrary to popular belief that visitors now can indulge the local cuisine, and even experience indigenous culture through vivid and deliberate programmes held by the hospitality services providers. The main point in support of this view is that food supplied from hotel’s kitchen tend to be more hygienic. Even though it sometimes may not be tasted as good as the offerings of local vendors, the flavor is similar. This is often because the ingredients are bought and the cook are recruited locally. In addition to local food specialities. Foreign visitors are now able to enjoy various traditional art forms in their temporarily staying place. This stems from the fact that service providers are aware of providing tourists with realistic experiences would help them survive in the increasingly competitive hospitality market these days . Thus, travelers staying in hotels or resorts can be greatly beneficial from this.
In the light of these fact, hotel yet is a safe and viable choice for individuals who are looking for traveling overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As international travel becomes the major ...
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Line 2, column 674, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... utilization of hotel is more prevalent then its counterparts of accommodation. An...
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Line 3, column 896, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ompetitive hospitality market these days . Thus, travelers staying in hotels or re...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fact' or 'these facts'?
Suggestion: this fact; these facts
... beneficial from this. In the light of these fact, hotel yet is a safe and viable choice ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25356125356 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87263534627 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5648208367 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0526315789 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154335615232 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467647250069 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526962280236 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901293251005 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449672381027 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.