Many people argue that updating the latest national information will be more crucial than acknowledging worldwide news While others argue that being informed about local globally current affairs is of greater importance. I maintain that both types of news play a significantly integral role in people’s daily lives.
An argument for the necessity of domestic news would be the vitally up-to-the-minute information related to people’s daily activities. This could be explained by the fact that local news followers will be informed about a number of ongoing affairs in their community, thereby making any prompt adjustments if necessary. A good example of this could be the locally alarming notifications about natural disasters such as earthquakes, tsunamis, typhoons, and so on happening, which would help local people to be well-informed by moving to safer accommodation and receiving aid and food supplement from the local council. As a result, they can prevent the fatal impacts of these catastrophes.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that being aware of international news has certain benefits. To begin with, following international news can keep people up-to-date with information about global environmental issues. For example, this type of news often provides people with up-to-date reports about the harmful effects of climate change. Therefore, they would realize the urgency of the current environmental situation, thereby taking action to improve it. Furthermore, if people prefer world news, they can be well-informed about global pandemics. For example, during COVID-19, a dangerous pandemic, news programs on television report positive cases globally and preventative measures to the residents. Therefore, they would be more well-prepared by restricting their traveling to epicenters and applying precautions for protecting themselves and their families from this deadly virus.
In conclusion, while global news helps people to acquire more knowledge about other nations’ events and issues, I believe that keeping abreast of the up-to-the-minute news in their own countries is also greatly beneficial. In my opinion, it would be a better option for each individual to track both these types of news on a regular basis.
- People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the culture or artworks from other countries Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems 67
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children s sports between 2008 and 2014 The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1239759767 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572271386431 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9220234045 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.066666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305624735149 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117580180663 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750557203079 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216509968676 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603976741617 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.