Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the unaffordability of higher education of disadvantaged students, the provision of free-of-charge education has emerged as a topic of interest. It is argued that every students should be pursued college without fee, irrespective of their financial status. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that free-college policy would have an adverse bearing on both students and economy.
There are many compelling reasons why the government should waive tuition for every students. On the personal level, this policy will make opportunities for individuals who have talents in learning, however, can not approach higher education because of their socio-economic background. Therefore, they can easily find out their suistable jobs. On the society level, this free-college policy will bring out a more educated workforce, which is conductive to the prosperity of the economy and cultural community.
However, despite the aforementioned benefits, I would contend that covering higher education tuition for all students will effect negatively on both students and society. Firstly, the working market has become the more competitive environment. Therefore, the more bachelor’s degree holders, the more difficult they can get a job. So that aquisition of a tertiary degree will be meaningless. Secondly, if the government allot more money to abolish tuition fees, this will take a toll on government coffers. This will also leads to increase tax, budget deficits and decrease other social welfare.
In conclusion, while the potential benefits of tution waiver for every students make it seem a good idea, I believe that we should invest money on other fields of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...education tuition for all students will effect negatively on both students and society...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the more difficult they can get a job. So that aquisition of a tertiary degree will be...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...l on government coffers. This will also leads to increase tax, budget deficits and de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52307692308 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02869901963 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.691637457 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200354865331 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625055749286 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465173552814 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124067155633 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380110174409 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.