Advertising are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it positive or negative development?
As the proliferation of consumerism, implementing brand awareness strategy is of the essence. To this end many brands employ incessant promotional campaign, resulting in the omnipresence of advertising. In my opinion, the ubiquity of advertising is a negative development.
First of all, advertisments appear with increasing frequency on the variety of media platforms, which hitjack our watching, hearing and reading experience. In particular, when scrolling up the latest information on social media platforms, pop-up advertisments may appear intermittently on the screen like a nuisance.
Second, although media consumers believe some ad-free content will provide beneficial informations or news updates, the truth behind actually is aiming for advertising some kinds of products with their misleading information.
On a grader scale, consumers is routinely exposed to advertisments will aspire subliminally to buy more new needless products, such as clothing items, technolpgical stuffs or cosmetic items, etc,. Accordingly, this consumering behaviours will instigate people to ramp up their shopping budget that faciliate to enormous wastage. As a result, this will exert negatively on environment in the future.
In conclusion, the growing popularity of advertising has numerous negative implications for both consumers’ budget and environment. It is imperative that stringent regulations regarding to advertising's trustworthiness and frequency of appearance should be put in place in order to mitigate these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...hnolpgical stuffs or cosmetic items, etc,. Accordingly, this consumering behaviour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09722222222 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48836678782 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0990713128 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12835336144 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477430857971 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432463205254 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624869452827 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243073047822 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.1 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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