In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, more and more students are forced to study in a very hectic schedule, as academic performances are now seen as the most vital quality to judge an individual. Burning the midnight oil everyday is no longer unfamilar. Although studying does play a prominent role in one’s life, in my opinion, today’s youth would be dangerously affected if people continue to bring them up in such pressure and stress.
To begin with, students who study recklessly from an early age are most likely to lose their childhood or innocence quickly. being raised in a competitive environment, they do not have any hobbies or interests, because of the fact that their only activity is sitting at school and tutoring centers, learning subjects which they usually dislike, participating in the trophy race. Furthermore, students who are pushed to their limits will suffer from illnesses such as obesity, fatigue or depression, due to the heavy and constant work loads.
Additionally, one who only knows to study is considered a nerd. In other words, they would not pay attention to other moral values such as love, kindness or proper manners. All they care about is winning, along with being academically good. Lacking human skills would be a barrier for them to get a job or simply, to communicate with other people in social communities.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of acquiring knowledge, parents and teachers should not compel students to study. Besides studying, it is advisable that they encourage students to find hobbies and develop relationships, as well as other human skills. In that case, students will have more opportunities to find their ego and express themselves as both a street smart and a book smart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
...e their childhood or innocence quickly. being raised in a competitive environment, th...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...y do not have any hobbies or interests, because of the fact that their only activity is sitting at schoo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08741258741 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7977993245 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6850640726 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155828592093 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464284762194 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383562001571 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840860644309 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443938896624 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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