Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions diverge on whether a university education is the best way to gain success in life. Although this can be justifiable, I am in opposition owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, university education is the ultimate key to unlock doors of success. It is perceptible that work opportunities are created due to the impact of university degrees. The reason is that multiple companies prefer graduates to others now that it is not necessary to waste time and money to train specialized knowledge and skills. Therefore, job opportunities will be higher for these people. Moreover, they have accumulated much accurate knowledge from their lecturer or professor after studying at university that is of paramount importance to their professional life. Their teachers have been trained properly to convey acquaintance to students. As a result, job achievement is easy to obtain with university education.
Conversely, I express my strong support to everyone’s idea nowadays that university is not the only way to succeed in life. Perceptibly, people still have many chances to work. They can choose and learn courses which are suitable for their working needs that they like. To be more accurate, they save money; moreover, they can start up and follow their passions with that money. Further and even more prominently, they spend time accumulating more practical experiences which are more necessary than theoretical knowledge. Furthermore, they receive more respect and high evaluation because they have a longer working life than their graduates of the same age. This suggests that they still have success in life without a university degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3861003861 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95649547958 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2488918266 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177143447914 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667509966092 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731504530561 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155414888794 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847408176449 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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