As per the author, no matter what, in any situation we should never compromise one’s beliefs than to adhere to them.
Even though i do not completely disagree with the author, there are some conditional approach too to look at it. It depends upon the what are the beliefs we are talking about here. for e.g one’s belief that to never compromise on the moral values and always work for the betterment of the society, does no harm.
However, as we progress and survive in the modern world, we should also we able to accept the change and modify our beliefs. I am not saying that we should modify all our beliefs, we should keep the good however should be able to accept the better.
For example, religious beliefs that women should never visit the temple of the god. Still in some rural parts of the north india as well as the south india women are not allowed to visit the temple. while some areas of the country has adapted to the change india is the hub of the software technologies, we still have some parts like this.
In some parts of india people have beliefs that men and women from the same village e.g in some parts of the state of gujarat, men are women can not marry. while in some parts men and women from the different community if they get married then it is a curse, disrespect of the family. And the worst part is that they any couple do so then people me go on and do the honor killing as well.
While I agree that some beliefs should be followed, how ever I would gainsay to strictly sticking to some old beliefs without analyzing self or overlooking at its disadvantages.
- No matter what the situation it is more harmful to compromise one s beliefs than to adhere to them 50
- Some people believe that the most important qualities of an effective teacher are understanding and empathy Others believe that it is more important for teachers to be rigorous and demanding in their expectations for students 77
- The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants Recently butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States This change however has had little impact 62
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, then, well, while, for example, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4406779661 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24434941138 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2570494655 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182616067485 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800074850944 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154694070237 0.0758088955206 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14376352977 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202574970409 0.0667264976115 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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