A rise in standard of living in a country seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems might those differences cause? How can these problems be reduced?
It is assumed that the growing propensity of living conditions in a nation is favorable to urban areas rather than rural ones. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As the more developed the quality of life is, the more advantages an urban environment has and several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that the gap between the poor and the rich will obviously be more dire. The proportion of impoverished peasants may outweigh the affluent resulting in social unrest with disturbing crimes such as robbery or larceny. Further pressures will include a rising tendency of poverty and hunger in indigent families. This is because they cannot afford the high price of goods and services and in turn a potential serious health problem if they lack food and beverage.
There are several actions that the government could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a useful suggestion would be to apply tax reduction for disadvantaged background families. This will help them to ease financial burdens and focus on other more important issues relating to educational or medical services. Another positive way to mitigate this issue is that the government should offer more employment opportunities for the impoverished in rural areas. This can be done by encouraging some businesses to build their industries in these regions helping a large number families improve their living standard.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various negative results of increasing living conditions and appropriate measures need to be taken to tackle these problems.
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- A rise in standard of living in a country seems to benefit cities more than rural areas What problems might those differences cause How can these problems be reduced
- A rise in standard of living in a country seems to benefit cities more than rural areas What problems might those differences cause How can these problems be reduced 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34831460674 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82685454566 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9754909447 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224782721614 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699287629659 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455484299985 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126640492668 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260495411784 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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