Some say that modern technology is giving people more free time, while others think it is making them busier
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, Technologes are developing evolving.Some people think that technology is giving they more free time, but others believe it is making them busier.
Today, all of the people use a new technoloy. It is good. Because technologies make a little time. Thus people prefer to use a new technology rather then other things. If people have not enough time they can use technology. In the past, people had not technology for done something However, we can not our life without technologys today. If people use technology they have a lot of time for doing other works. For example, today all of the women use washing machines and electric mixer. It helps to finish our work earlier.
On the other hand some people believe it is making them busier. For example the demand for using technology which is not behind the times is growing considerably. This reason programist is working hard and much. Thus, they have not enough time for vacation. Moreover, it effect their health. For example if programist is work much their eyes will be impaired.
To conclude and give my opinion technologys are helping us to create spare time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90052356021 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5823887524 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2888168717 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.0588235294 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2352941176 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302973355957 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100453134191 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121903773608 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235383269731 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128590090069 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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