Most young people without a partner would prefer to have a boyfriend or girlfriend. yet being in a relationship when you are young is not always a good idea. as part of a class project, write about whether you agree or disagree. give reasons for your answer.
When you are young, there is often a great deal of peer pressure put upon you to be in a relationship. although most young people spent a lot of time dreaming about finding the right boyfriend or girlfriend. I believe that early relationships can lead to many problems which young men and women might not be able to solve easily.
Firstly, having a special friend is a huge responsibility. it takes up a lot of time looking after the needs and interests of another person. it could be better to spend this time studying or playing the sport. after all, there will be plenty of opportunities for young persons to share their lives later, when they are grown up.
Next, there is a financial situation to consider. some activities are cheaper to do together but most are not. often one partner has more money than the other and must pay for both when, for instance, they go to the movies or to a restaurant. also, young people love to buy gifts for each other and may try to impress by spending more than necessary.
Some people argue that today’s youth are better informed than their parents were and, therefore, might be more capable of making a relationship succeed. this may be true, but young people today still have many emotional problems to face, in a relationship it is more difficult. for instance, it is hard to have complete trust in someone without a strong commitment. jealousy can be very destructive, especially at an early age.
In conclusion, while it is true that, for young people, being together and in love is wonderful, there are often many difficult issues to cope with in a full-time relationship.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...e put upon you to be in a relationship. although most young people spent a lot of time d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...pecial friend is a huge responsibility. it takes up a lot of time looking after th...
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Suggestion: It
... needs and interests of another person. it could be better to spend this time stud...
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Suggestion: After
...his time studying or playing the sport. after all, there will be plenty of opportunit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...e is a financial situation to consider. some activities are cheaper to do together b...
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Suggestion: Often
...heaper to do together but most are not. often one partner has more money than the oth...
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Suggestion: Also
...ey go to the movies or to a restaurant. also, young people love to buy gifts for eac...
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Suggestion: This
...pable of making a relationship succeed. this may be true, but young people today sti...
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Suggestion: For
...in a relationship it is more difficult. for instance, it is hard to have complete t...
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Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Jealousy
...in someone without a strong commitment. jealousy can be very destructive, especially at ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68870395595 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4134067127 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277460427416 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834242937028 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656428538202 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149774469798 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750378041865 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...e put upon you to be in a relationship. although most young people spent a lot of time d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...pecial friend is a huge responsibility. it takes up a lot of time looking after th...
^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... needs and interests of another person. it could be better to spend this time stud...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...his time studying or playing the sport. after all, there will be plenty of opportunit...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...e is a financial situation to consider. some activities are cheaper to do together b...
^^^^
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Often
...heaper to do together but most are not. often one partner has more money than the oth...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ey go to the movies or to a restaurant. also, young people love to buy gifts for eac...
^^^^
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...pable of making a relationship succeed. this may be true, but young people today sti...
^^^^
Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...in a relationship it is more difficult. for instance, it is hard to have complete t...
^^^
Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Jealousy
...in someone without a strong commitment. jealousy can be very destructive, especially at ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68870395595 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4134067127 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277460427416 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834242937028 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656428538202 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149774469798 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750378041865 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.