English has been a bridge among number of nations since it appeared as a international language. However, many other languages have been dominated by English but its benefits are way more than its downsides. As far as I am concerned to this thought, i reckon that English has brought plethora of advantages.
To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that it has shrinked the world. This means the outbreak of global language has marginalized discrimination as people of all colors , religions, sex can communicate without being hesitated. For instance, according to survey conducted in 2008 revealed that large number of people who travel all across the world found their visit more pleasurable due to easy correspondence. Moreover, with the one language, people are able to break the ice with the other country's citizens and can know more about each other's culture and rituals.
In addition, there has been continuous rise in the business deals among different countries. In this way , English marked its achievement in bringing Harmony between nations. For example , in today's world, export and import between Canada and India at its peak. Besides , this language has an edge over other languages because it is the most easiest launguage one can learn in short period of time. While some people are struggling to brush up on their fluency other mastered it. So , this is the solely reason iota of people are in antagonism.
To recapitulate, according to above proceeding discussion, I am highly inclined to my notion. To my mind , English will continue to lead with myriad benefits and luxuries it is providing in present. Therefore, it is worth emphasized on its expansion.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... number of nations since it appeared as a international language. However, many o...
^
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... far as I am concerned to this thought, i reckon that English has brought plethor...
^
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t plethora of advantages. To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that it ha...
^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d discrimination as people of all colors , religions, sex can communicate without ...
^^
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...s citizens and can know more about each others culture and rituals. In addition, th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s among different countries. In this way , English marked its achievement in bring...
^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing Harmony between nations. For example , in todays world, export and import betw...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en Canada and India at its peak. Besides , this language has an edge over other la...
^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
... over other languages because it is the most easiest launguage one can learn in short period...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...asiest launguage one can learn in short period of time. While some people are struggling to br...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... one can learn in short period of time. While some people are struggling to brush up ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p on their fluency other mastered it. So , this is the solely reason iota of peopl...
^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...highly inclined to my notion. To my mind , English will continue to lead with myri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09057971014 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86707257199 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0865002529 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139254627036 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447487573974 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450256570223 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868346865705 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454181071584 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... number of nations since it appeared as a international language. However, many o...
^
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... far as I am concerned to this thought, i reckon that English has brought plethor...
^
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t plethora of advantages. To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that it ha...
^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d discrimination as people of all colors , religions, sex can communicate without ...
^^
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...s citizens and can know more about each others culture and rituals. In addition, th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s among different countries. In this way , English marked its achievement in bring...
^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing Harmony between nations. For example , in todays world, export and import betw...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en Canada and India at its peak. Besides , this language has an edge over other la...
^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
... over other languages because it is the most easiest launguage one can learn in short period...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...asiest launguage one can learn in short period of time. While some people are struggling to br...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... one can learn in short period of time. While some people are struggling to brush up ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p on their fluency other mastered it. So , this is the solely reason iota of peopl...
^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...highly inclined to my notion. To my mind , English will continue to lead with myri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09057971014 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86707257199 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0865002529 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139254627036 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447487573974 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450256570223 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868346865705 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454181071584 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.