Everyone should study at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Education play a major role in development and growth of the nation as it provides knowledge about various subjects. That is why all youngsters should complete their schooling upto senior secondary. I agree to the thought to a limited extent and will discuss its positives and negatives before reaching the logical conclusion.
Commencing with, schools help the youth to access the world of knowledge. It provides lot of opportunities to pupils for recognising their interest. For instance, many educational institute provide facilities of various sports, drama, theatre clubs to children for finding their talent.
Moreover, having higher school certificates and qualification gives more job opportunities as it enhances their resumes when they seek for jobs.
In today's competitive world, student with education will be prioritize while getting promotions, results in higher packages.
On the paradoxical side, it should not be compulsory for everyone as financial condition of family is the main element. In poor families, children have to start earning as soon as possible to contribute to their families. Furthermore, educational system of some countries lack vocational education which creates lot of pressure on those students who do not want to pursue their career in academics. For example, if person do not have interest in theoretical learnings, there are lot of other options such as car mechanics, electrician, plumbers and many more in which he can do much better.
To conclude everyone should decide this according to their situation along with field of interest. In my opinion government should subsidise education so that everyone can access it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51361867704 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95599504493 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657587548638 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9606922128 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126013264142 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446446881857 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386503101861 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610106787531 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044957248702 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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