Task 1: (Map) :The picture below shows the diference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010, 2025
The maps illustrate a number of changes which will be took place in the conference centre in the year 2025 compared to that in 2010.
Overall, the entire conference centre will witness significant development in terms of new rooms for different purposes.
Regarding the left corner of the picture, Residence Hall which includes 20 rooms will be contructed in 2025 in the north-east. Moreover, below Residence Hall will be a new car parking which replaces a garden in 2010. In the bottom right-hand side of car park, there will be two new rooms, one for game and one for music.
With regard to the right corner of the layout, the location and size of two rooms and reception will remain unchange to the north-west of the garden. Next to these is the Hall, which will extend to the east. In the centre of the layout, the garden will be cut down to the bottom for news rooms but it will expand to the left-hand. People will add It centre, meeting rooms, canteen and kitchen in the bottom right-hand corner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centres'?
Suggestion: centres
...nd to the left-hand. People will add It centre, meeting rooms, canteen and kitchen in ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63687150838 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43488273068 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502793296089 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.947715711 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131175620034 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650135756585 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728944940146 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111118212465 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783863229498 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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