Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people today are living in the belief that the success of career is the key leading to a meaningful life and consider working as the most important part of their life. In my opinion, this stance is totally false because the adequacy of finance does not have the same meaning as the adequacy of happiness, moreover, life has much more things than working.
On the one hand, a meaningful life is a happy life. It cannot be denied that the more successful your career is, the more responsibilities, difficulties, and nervousness you have. Obviously, once undertaking a glittering job, people are demanded to spend much more time working to fulfill expectations. Additionally, taking on a pivotal role requires more effort and a higher level of responsibility since your decision now is across-the-board. Hence, people eventually hardly have opportunities to enjoy their achievements, and hardly find tranquility.
On the other hand, life is made up of many things, not only a career. To think about our life, we could easily see that career and work are just a part of life. Therefore, even if your career is not so successful, that is still not the end of the world. I firmly believe that your life is more worthwhile when helping poor people or blooming the bonding between you and your family, and friends. Thanks to that, you could find peace of mind which would be more valuable than any tangible perks.
In conclusion, a successful career is not the only way leading to happiness, there are still more factors that make your life worthwhile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91287878788 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88662957098 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1131326539 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313778738578 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115018063918 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952033768787 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197457960372 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634261644648 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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