The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and B
The given bar charts demonstrate the rate of men and women employees in 2 regions A and B. Overall, one can see that almost workers in both 2 countries prefer working jobs related to services, while in country B less people choose to work in agriculture field.
In country A, there are almost 50% of workers work in services in both 2 genders: the figure is 56% and 49% for male and female respectively. While the number of workers in agriculture accounts for 43% in female, the number of male is 16% less than the women one. But the number of employees in industry in male is nearly two times more than the number of female: 15% in comparison to 8%.
In region B, the proportion of services accounts for respectively 65% and 88% for men and women. The figures in industry secot in both genders are nearly the same: no more than 5%. In terms of agriculture sector, there is a significant difference: in male the number of workers accounts for 32%, while the number in the opponent gender only 11%
- Some people claim that the media has a negative influence on contemporary society They think that htere is very little tolerance for new ideas because of its impact To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that web content should be used to instruct children others think that it is not helpful in an educational setting Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 73
- Art and music should be mandatory subjects To what extent do you agree and disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...related to services, while in country B less people choose to work in agriculture fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52197802198 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56915580033 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.540700303 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181474498421 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808647358317 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690570206182 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126977062061 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539125886703 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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