The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and B
The given bar charts demonstrate the rate of men and women employees in 2 regions A and B. Overall, one can see that almost workers in both 2 countries prefer working jobs related to services, while in country B less people choose to work in agriculture field.
In country A, there are almost 50% of workers work in services in both 2 genders: the figure is 56% and 49% for male and female respectively. While the number of workers in agriculture accounts for 43% in female, the number of male is 16% less than the women one. But the number of employees in industry in male is nearly two times more than the number of female: 15% in comparison to 8%.
In region B, the proportion of services accounts for respectively 65% and 88% for men and women. The figures in industry secot in both genders are nearly the same: no more than 5%. In terms of agriculture sector, there is a significant difference: in male the number of workers accounts for 32%, while the number in the opponent gender only 11%
- Some people claim that the media has a negative influence on contemporary society They think that htere is very little tolerance for new ideas because of its impact To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Art and music should be mandatory subjects To what extent do you agree and disagree 73
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 73
- The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and B 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...related to services, while in country B less people choose to work in agriculture fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52197802198 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56915580033 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.540700303 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181474498421 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808647358317 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690570206182 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126977062061 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539125886703 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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