In today's world, education is seen as a tool for improving society by almost every person, but the question at what age children should enter school is usually a moot point. Some people thought that boys and girls should start their education journey at a very early age whereas others believe they should consider this after certain age. In this essay, i will shed some light on both views and I will share my opinion.
The people who consider children to start early schoolings is mainly because to develop their academic and social behavioural. This is because, children at this age are full of curiosity, and it is scientific proved that amount of knowledge consumed by any child between 0-5 years will impact the future education. In addition, many children tend to remain antisocial when confined within the four walls, when these child starts early schooling, they will get an opportunity to meet various children of same age, subsequently starts socialising themselves.
On the other hand, others believe that educating a child at an early education will put them in a stressful situation. The reason being is, the child at those age wants to spend a day by playing not by studying. Not only they were forced to go to school, but some parents also want their child to be best among the class, leading to unhappy times post school hours. Consequently, the child entire day will be filled with distress.
In Conclusion, even though started educating a child early has its own advantages and disadvantages, I believed that children should start early school, a school which does not educate academics rather a school with curriculum which teach social behavioural, yoga and meditation. This is because, knowledge can be gained at each age whereas the character must be shaped at the early age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... this after certain age. In this essay, i will shed some light on both views and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9801980198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57840910878 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.989694484 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239326599013 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930166626956 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411072573472 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156430443025 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254220971463 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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