A new shopping center is going to open in your town. at present, nobody knows what kind of shops or facilities are going to be provided for customers. what shops and facilities would you like to see made available to the shopping public? give reasons for your answer and make useful suggestions for the shopping center’s management.
It is true that local communities would be happy, if any new shopping center going to open. While new shopping mall are initiating in the local area, we can suggest all of the advantages to the management, which can reach to the customers. This essay will explicated the merits of the new shopping centers in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first suggestion of mine is that, marketing is one of the biggest platform for any kinds of shop. So that, management ca do online ads such as Facebook, WhatsApp's and so on. Secondly, informing to the local customers about home delivery. If shop authority receives order from online, parcel with in 24 hours then shoppers will be happy. Due to this, sale will grow up dramatically. In addition, management can make some banners to distribute local people as how they provide all facilities.
Adding further, there are more advises to be added. The shop authority collect money after delivery. It would be great advantages for local communities, if get any commodities before paying price. Another pivotal aspect is that, more car parking would be a great idea in the shopping center, customers will purchase more products from the shop without any doubt. Last but not the least, ensuring security is an essential for all of the customers. So that, management should concern about the mall that fully covered by CCTV.
To sum up, according to argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of the new shopping center for local people are indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ating in the local area, we can suggest all of the advantages to the management, which can...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explicate'
Suggestion: explicate
...reach to the customers. This essay will explicated the merits of the new shopping centers ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs will be happy. Due to this, sale will grow up dramatically. In addition, manag...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., ensuring security is an essential for all of the customers. So that, management should c...
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Suggestion:
...CTV. To sum up, according to argument aforementioned above one can reach to a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95366795367 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67505996136 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0067268021 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270876357905 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888844396417 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780949063962 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177768740221 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495694567367 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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