Some people believe that the world is much less safe today than it used to be. there are still many wars being fought, and high tech weapons are sold openly to any country that wants to buy them. in cities, violent crime is increasing every year. it is not a very safe world in which to bring up children. do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer.
It is true that today world is unsafe due to the cutting edge weapons which are used in war. I totally agree with this statement new born babies are not secure in this world at the moment owing to this issue. This essay will high light that certainly this is a rational approach that needs to be opted.
To begin with, many countries are selling nuclear weapons to others like UAE, KSA so on. Making money is the main purpose around the globe. If the world is facing danger, no one bother about situation. Another reason of the dealing with weapon is that show up the power or sustainability of the world form different countries. For example, a recent survey done by 'UK news' in the UK, around 40 millions weapons are sold by USA to UAE. Hence, it is clear that if any new babies are coming in this world definitely going to face insecurity.
Elaborating my viewpoints more, a large number of modern weapons are using in different cities. Due to the fact that violent will be increased day by day. Categorically discussing, it can not be ignored that preserving huge number of weapons are very harmful for the world. Thus, children would fell safe, if we take some steps to stop selling all kinds of arms.
In conclusion, according to argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that if we want to be safe our children and world, need to take some measures to stop buy and sell weapons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56692913386 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46827473851 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1957898113 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232092188826 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703449118991 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444821252945 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130855019106 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247315745699 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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