The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition

Essay topics:

The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

As per reference from Abraham Lincon's quote - "Organization is of the people, by the people, and for the people". Any Organization's Future depends on its leading board as they are the ones who take the end decision and are going to decide where Organization ends up to. Coming to the prompt, I agree with the Author that, For making youth leadership ready they much work with a sense of cooperation rather than competition. For supporting my though below are the two reasons:

Every Company has a leadership board of members not only one decision-making authority. For any coming crucial decision which on holds the company's profit-loss or reputation, board members of deciding committee come together and discuss possible solutions. In this situation, If CEO or any authoritative person starts being dogmatic with their views then this conflict will hinder the best possible solution for the company's benefit. This conflict may take a political turn and will part the company's employees in different views. For the given situation if a decision is being made by taking every point of view into consideration then the authority can take a decision based on thinking which suits the best.

If we take the example of any political party, Lead of the party must be the one who runs the party by taking it altogether not by degrading other who opposes his view. If the leader starts taking his own party's people as their competition then this will be hazardous for the party's future as this conflict in view in one team will benefit the opposite party and they will try to play a "divide and rule" strategy. therefore, it comes to a leader's rudimentary work to be in cooperation and also make others to do the same.

In contrast to this, the leader should also take charge of every next step taking his position into consideration. Leaders must be that much dominant that every person of the team should consider his words as the final decision and work according to that.

Taking all the above points into consideration, It is safe to say that being a co-operative essential skill in every leader as taking all along together is the only way of success for any organization.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a leader' or simply 'leaders'?
Suggestion: a leader; leaders
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92741935484 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83850279 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9602481045 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.928571429 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141545228668 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536401034921 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385812645058 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782819246801 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504103829273 0.0667264976115 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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