Write a paragraph about family rules.
In my family, there are some rules that we have to obey. Firstly, my sister and I have to help our parents’ with the household chores to help alleviate the burden on their shoulders. For example, when our mom and dad work late, we will take turns preparing dinner, doing the laundry and washing the dishes. Secondly, we should all arrive home before 8:30 in the evening. My parents believe that setting a curfew can ensure our safety and help us to become more responsible. Finally, our parents want us to do exercises everyday. They often say that sitting for too long and gluing to the computer’s screens can easily cause headaches, eye strains and even obesity. Exercising, on the other hand, can not only help us to stay in shape but also lower the risks of these health issues. In conclusion, these are some rules in my family, and I will try my best to follow them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 520, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ly, our parents want us to do exercises everyday. They often say that sitting for too lo...
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Line 1, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ong and gluing to the computer’s screens can easily cause headaches, eye strains ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54430379747 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37496152323 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664556962025 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6344436183 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0338939764988 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175984319065 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336068546876 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338939764988 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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