Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the globalization process, we have witnessed the development of industrialization in many countries in the world. This would cause a dispute about whether money from the government's or a private company's budget should be spent on it. There are scores of people who assert that the development of a country depends on the number of lavish and massive building construction projects. By contrast, money is widely believed to be invested in hospital and school infrastructure. From my perspective, money is necessary to be invested in both ideas of the statement.
On the one hand, there are several rationales to acknowledge that building construction is worthy of investment. One of the most compelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently considered a standard of a developed country. For instance, in many industrial countries such as the United States of America, England, and France, where a variety of buildings with splendid architecture and modern techniques have been placed. Subsequently, those constructions are considered to be the representation of a country’s development. Another substantial reason is that pouring money into buildings is a method for unemployed people. Due to the fact that the rate of citizens who have not had a stable job is constantly a concern for the nation's authorities, Additionally, the increasing number of tower or building construction projects provides the opportunity for workers to take advantage and create their own paths.
On the other hand, there is a remarkable reason to believe that money should be spent correspondingly on school and hospital facilities. In particular, education and medicine are both indispensable fields to be concerned by the government and residents of every country. In the majority of people’s assessments, investing money in education and medicine stands for a radical thought, and represents a country's civilization. Indeed, from a recent research depicts that a country with money supplied on schools and hospitals is likely to have a surge in its percentage of the economy, higher than the average proportion of the world's.
In conclusion, I assess that pouring money into the development of buildings and enhancing the quality of the infrastructure in schools as well as hospitals are equally essential. In addition, I suggest that the government ought to take action to manage the expenditures from the government’s budget and other private enterprise investments, in terms of satisfying the requirement of constructing buildings, improving schools and hospitals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mpelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently consid...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...s a countrys civilization. Indeed, from a recent research depicts that a country with money suppl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4603960396 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37178868341 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507425742574 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3468620078 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.764705882 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271646015505 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902031212284 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673985011793 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167032161662 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456984603283 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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