Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
he significant challenges faced by countries around the world are namely the environment, population and education. Although, all of the above mentioned problems are significant, the problem that would be more prominent to solve in the next 10 years will be the issues regarding the environment. If we narrow it down, the two main issues damaging the environment are deforestation and plastic waste disposal
Firstly, let's look in detail the problems that would arise due to deforestation. As we cut down trees to build shopping complexes and fancy buildings, we tend to forget that we are actually destroying the balance in nature. There is a saying," What goes around, comes around". In a recent survey, it has been recorded that the number of natural disasters has increased at an alarming rate. For instance, Kerala has never experienced floods past 50 years, but since 2017 the flood rates per year have increased drastically. Hence, the government has to take immediate actions such as planting a tree per family should be made compulsory across the country. In addition, the law has to be imposed to ban cutting down of trees.
Another main concern is the disposal of plastic waste as they are non-biodegradable materials. Hence, it is difficult to dispose them. Although, everyone is aware regarding the damage caused through videos and photographs, they tend to ignore it in order to satisfy their ease and comfort. There has been many photographs clicked to show the effects caused when dumped at sea. For example, the infamous picture of a plastic waste stuck around the neck of sea turtle. This a serious concern, one important step the government can take is banning its production.
To conclude, as Greta Thudberg said,"How dare we destroy nature with our selfish acts". We have a basic responsibility to preserve and nurture the nature that gives us everything. Hence, Government should take these matters seriously by introducing strict laws and punishments for anyone who violate it, as we are making it difficult for our future generation to live on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, regarding, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17008797654 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96499356935 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627565982405 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6542603241 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192294186727 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506868132918 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735317022019 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117658202433 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112601112785 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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