The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern society, many people from around the world dispute whether humans’s life without initiative to connect people and to meet all demands of searching for information or the latest news such as the Internet would have a remarkable change. Although a myriad of citizens assert that their lives in particular and humans in general will witness a fluctuation of habit routine if the Internet does not exist. I personally completely agree with this statement.
There are several rationales to acknowledge that lacking of the Internet would trigger an inimical impact on their living conditions. The most significant reason is that the world without the Internet would cause a detrimental impact on the development of many country's industries. This is because the Internet has a considerable contribution to make grassroots from all over the world have a certain knowledge of each field that they engage in.This is perfectly exemplified in case of a scientist's theory established with an aim to elucidate that from many situations humans from the last 30 years has utterly indispensable to the Internet. As a result, a majority of people claim that living without the Internet is a disaster for humans’s civilization.
Another compelling reason is that the Internet has a sustainable role of making contacts throughout the COVID-19 pandemic. This is mainly due to the fact that residents from each nation will have a quarantine to stamp out the spreading of COVID virus. For instance, In Vietnam by 2019, the communist party coordinated with the 63 region’s authority leaders to enact a regulation stating all of the people residing in Vietnam to minimize their socialization. Because of this emergency situation, many schools and companies had to shut down all activities and began to rely on social network services related to the Internet. Therefore, humans prevalently depend on the Internet to continue their living habits.
In conclusion, although there are many aspects of the Internet, I still believe that the Internet has an unsuspicious influence in human’s lives. It is advisable for people to acknowledge the Internet’s vital contribution and to learn how to utilize the Internet effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'scientists'' or 'scientist's'?
Suggestion: scientists'; scientist's
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35127478754 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02312614762 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2596723432 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176124232589 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683616675496 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447736285742 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110525829884 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559985054952 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.