Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, Internet has been gaining traction. Based on their convenience, some universities put forward online courses for students who want to study online. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.
On the one hand, the huge potential of acquiring knowledge through wireless networks brings about significant benefits in human lives. The principle one is saving money. For example, people don’t have to pay fees for transportation, meals, or rent. In addition, some university has recorded the lessons so students can replay them every time until understand completely. Besides, the Internet support students to research new information out of the books fast like lightning. Especially, online learning offers open access to anybody who has an inclination to study, regardless of age, location, or background.
However, despite the aforementioned benefits, I would contend that way to study brings a host of drawbacks. A major drawback is downward health. According to experts, people who spend hours sitting at their computer, forget to do exercise can easily get into troubles of physic and mind. In terms of the body, problems are backache, headaches, and blurred eyes. When it comes to mind and emotions, there was several negative things such as prolonged stress, and depression. Another pronounced problem is a distraction. One reason behind this is some students are easily attracted to social media, video games, and comics. Not only that, these actions will affect academic results.
In conclusion, while there are some justifications for considering accepting knowledge effectively and healthily more important than other problems, I would contend that people will derive the most benefit from studying online reasonably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53090909091 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83910357171 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701818181818 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5266007387 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277557419685 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600776813613 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630338057821 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15564282592 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644563615626 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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