These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
These days, with the extensive use of the Internet people are no longer tied to the place of work or study, so they can freely change cities, countries or even continents. While moving abroad is widely considered as a life-transforming opportunity, people should nonetheless take into account the number of challenges they may face. This essay will explore pros and cons of going to foreign country and show why it is beneficial.
To begin with, no matter what your reason is, there are numerous advantages of relocating abroad for a while. Generally, better quality of life is one of the major rewards for those who has made this life-changing decision. For example, hundreds of Ukrainians migrate to Australia each year due to the warmer climate and attractive work-life balance. Moreover, working or studying overseas can provide us a invaluable opportunity to make valuable professional and friendly connections all over the world, leading to greater career prospects anywhere. Not to mention, that meeting new people with different cultural backgrounds expends our horizons and broadens perception of life.
However, migration commonly means stepping out of your comfort zone which combined with language barrier, may lead to giving up and return home soon after. For instance, this is especially true if you are leaving a small, quiet city to find yourself in a hectic metropolis like Sydney, New York or Milan. In addition, starting a brand new life from scratch could be sufficiently challenging for even the most outgoing people.
In conclusion, despite the fact that living abroad can be a quantum leap towards a bright future for many, its negative effects should not be neglected. Nevertheless, the advantages such as better quality of life and unique opportunities far outweigh disadvantages.
- With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete Universities should only procure digital media rather than constantly updating textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and giv 80
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- More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list What are the reasons for this What can be done to solve this problem 77
- University experience is more important than a university s degree Some people argue that university life is much more important than an education degree in job market Do you agree or not agree 89
- As cities expanding some people claim governments should look forward creating better networks of public transportation available for everyone rather than building more roads for vehicle owning population What s your opinion Give some examples or experien 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28819444444 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92467279153 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1927012251 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168193561718 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535149012421 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288083085552 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951059532386 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389968232676 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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