Some people believe that it is best to accept the bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve that situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
There has been a long-time debate whether to accept the unfortunate situations or to make efforts in order to improve that situations. Bad situations are inevitable in life and the person’s success can only be achieved with the way he/she reacts according to the situations. Hence, there are many merits and demerits of each of the approaches.
On the one hand, getting saturated because of a failure can make one accustomed to this negative trait which will make an individual prone to make these kind of decisions more frequently. In case of job dissatisfaction, it can occur by various factors like lower wage, incorrect job appointment by the employer etc. If an individual accepts the situation it can damage the person’s ability to grow more in the field of his/her choice.
On the other hand, if a person faces these negative situations in a positive way and tries to improve from their past mistakes, it can lead to drastic improvements which can be beneficial to person’s well- being. Taking the previous example once again, in this scenario, if a person is unsatisfied with the work he/she is currently enrolled in and decides to change the firm in order to promote his/her personal as well as professional growth would make him a better human and helps him to gain a wider knowledge making him more proficient with the field of choice.
To sum up, I believe in the saying ‘ Try and try until succeed’ and thus prefer to find a way out of the bad situations to turn the tables and make the life more meretricious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: Try to
.... To sum up, I believe in the saying ‘ Try and try until succeed’ and thus prefer to f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79709606486 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2400367909 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.444444444 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169582126495 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756851950185 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506346529412 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110514120676 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198066962498 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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