The use of social media, such as Facebook or Twitter, is replacing face to face contact in this century. Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage?
While I accept that social networking sites make communication between people more convenient, I believe that there are also have some negative effects on our skills of personal interaction. Overall, in this context, I would argue that the drawbacks in the decline of social skills outweigh the advance in technology.
On the one hand, using social media is beneficial in some ways. For example, people may want to post their latest news on Facebook, enabling their friends and family to keep abreast of what has been happening and to send comments. One simple Facebook posting can reach hundreds of contacts. Another advantages is that those who have psychological problems such as autism, or who lack of self-confidence in face-to-face meetings, can find an alternative outlet to express what they are thinking and feeling, or even to exchange pleasantries with others.
On the other hand, this trend has some drawbacks. Firstly, some people h=may become over-reliant on acquaintances in the virtual world. There are some unscrupulous users of social media, who adopt a false identity to trick people and acquire information about them for online scams and cyber crime. Secondly, such sites discourage real interaction. When obsessed with Facebook, Twitter or similar sites, some youngsters in particular are reluctant to spend time with their true friends and their families. My friend, for instance, is so addicted to exchanging messages on her phone that she ignores everyone when we gather together for a chat. While I try to adopt a laid-back attitude towards this behaviou, there is now almost a complete breakdown in communication between us.
In conclusion, I consider that the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages, and the ability articulate thoughts and emotions to others face-to-face may soon lost altogether.
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- The use of social media such as Facebook or Twitter is replacing face to face contact in this century Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage 95
- The use of social media such as Facebook or Twitter is replacing face to face contact in this century Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...undreds of contacts. Another advantages is that those who have psychological probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36426116838 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95217605598 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6746088843 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244747335319 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072919225666 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643250137398 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147859294483 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573108823121 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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