Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Drivers have to pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is a great amount of traffic | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Drivers have to pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is a great amount of traffic.

Living in crowded cities and using last-updated vehicles are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact we live in a chaotic and fast-paced world, it is necessary for us to pay more attention to our quality of life's quality. In particular, everybody uses their private cars and it is a burden on the government to take beneficial strategies. Some of these strategies make our lives have better quality and standard of living. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether Drivers have to pay a fee for driving on busy city streets when there is a great amount of traffic or whether there are more fruitful ways to achieve society’s goals. Some people possess the conviction that the former is more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter has a better chance to occur. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted. While there are many aspects that we can consider as major features that affect our life, some people try to ignore the best ways of their efforts. I’d rather continue with the first approach. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that some rules that the government sets are strict. As prices have risen nowadays, it is hard for people to afford their lives easily. Some of them have to drive their own cars to go to work. Thus, air pollution and noise pollution are high during rush hours. Recently, the government set new rules that state cars that have odd or even numbers can drive on certain days of the week. Although this issue seems to be efficient, unfortunately, there is mass traffic on roads and highways. Meanwhile, people can use public transportation instead of their own cars. I think finding people who use their own car solid, would be amiable and will decrease the air pollution rate in big cities.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that people use online taxi order applications. Some of these applications use machine learning algorithms to calculate the price of travel. Some of them are more expensive in the morning and evening. When the government set a rule to limit and fine drivers. people lost their sense of willingness to use these applications because they are so expensive for clients. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. I use Uber for going to work, but in the morning it is expensive. I think if our company provides free driving services for us, we can eliminate our usage of these applications, and consequently, makes other coworkers use this service.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think this statement that Drivers have to pay a fee for driving on busy city streets when there is a great amount of traffic is fruitful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...t set a rule to limit and fine drivers. people lost their sense of willingness to use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, while, i think, in brief, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.859437751 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69827519374 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3473496282 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6296296296 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96296296296 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226021799147 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562272919148 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114811230686 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209332447241 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18923950826 0.0645574589148 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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