Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Some people think that it is important to have history in educational program. other people belive that in present era subjects like science and technology has significant role in school studies. However i believe that history and science have equal importance in school syllabus. history allow us to understand our cultural. science helps in advancment of the world
Studying history acquires knowledge on early civilization. it is neccesary to know about our history. history tells how things are done. there are many things which we are adopted from our ancestors. it is important to remmember people who helped to bring change in the world. it is essential for every one to know about their history, so they can know about the legacy of their land, ancestors and many other things.
science and technology plays a vital role in todays education system. In this progressive world science has a key role in development of world. science assist to learn in development of new things. In present world runs on basis of technology. technology made things less complicated for people. science helped in many inventions which are used widely around the world. we able to explore space and oceans with the aid of science and technology. there are many facts which are still unknown, with science and technology in syllabus helps student to cope in this advance world
In conclusion, i firmly believe that history and science and technology has a vital role in students study program. history helps us to learn about our cultural and values where science helps us in advancment of the planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04166666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6104366668 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9171144947 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0526315789 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8947368421 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306604606875 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979004308829 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859997104391 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199183875023 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133659371747 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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