Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, some children spend a plenty of time of a day on their mobile phones. This is because of the use of social media and in my opinion this is a negative development for their coming life.
The increasing use of social media applications leaves most of the kids to spend hours a day on cell phone. Most of the children use these apps for social interaction and for entertainment purpose also. They want to become famous on these apps by sharing their photos, videos. For example, youngsters nowadays are posting reels for the Instagram and to make a perfect reel they use many apps for editing purpose which left them to use mobile phones for a lot of time.
From my point of view, the more usage of cell phones is a negative development for the kids future.As a result of the maximum use of phones the students are becoming weak in their studies as they are not giving much time to their work. And other reason is that children's bonding with their parents is getting weaker day by day because they are not spending time with their family. For instance, the famous child artists are giving a little time to their study as a consequence of this they remain weak in qualification sometime.
In conclusion, the users of social media pays more attention to their mobile phones and in my perspective this is a adverse development for the future of the young ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...teraction and for entertainment purpose also. They want to become famous on these ap...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...egative development for the kids future.As a result of the maximum use of phones t...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le phones and in my perspective this is a adverse development for the future of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60816326531 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48784132043 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473469387755 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2865093104 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191443842143 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975467142629 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699871657042 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158822232167 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100585888597 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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