Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, the restriction of selling product including food or beverage is supposed to be imposed due to the fact of bad impact towards the individual’s fitness. Partially, I consent to the same point of view which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, selling the food and drinks containing harm substance to the human body seems to me that might be more affordable so that it can be bought by all of the society. In terms of the price, individuals could fulfill their needs which is could help them to be alive. Furthermore, modern people possess high awareness towards their health including what kind of nutrition they need and what content that product consist of. It could help them to ovoid such product and choose substituted meals which is healthier.
On the other hand, in my point of view, this issue could bring benefit including decreasing people’s life expectancy. Society would consume such product which is offered in the market especially for people who don not know about the its composition. This could lead people to suffer disease and mortality rate would incline. In addition, in terms of human right, every person has right to choose what kind of product that they want to purchase regarding to their own body. All of the risk they would be responsible as they consideration.
To sum up, it seems to me that to regulate a shop owner regarding selling meals which contain harm effect for human body carries benefit; declining people’s life expectancy and tick the individuals right. This is as long as the people could fulfill their based necessity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, in addition, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94095940959 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65610383774 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5663134617 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178391557406 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605308240378 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490493587129 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1110009361 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305905169415 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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