Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Advertising influences people's behavior in a negative way.
First of all, the Advertisement encourage the human mind to buy more things. Peoples are buying too much in the influence of the attractive advertisement. Peoples are sometime waste their money on such a paviolus commodity.To illustate that my sister's exampple is enough. My father is coming from the marginal family. I don't spend my money in the influence of anything. But at the same time, my sister is always coming under the aura of any advertisement and spend her money on such radiculous things. As a result, my father is always scolding her, when she is coming back from the shopping.
Secondly, advertisent is promote to people new things by giving them such mind catching offers. As a result of this people is not completely use old thing and they put it in the garbage or giving it to anyone. So, natural resourses of the country is diminish drastically. For example, my brother always keen to spend his money on the new things. He always in the finding of the better offer on th e-commerse website. As a result of that he buy a new brand new shoes at 50 % discount.But when i saw his old nike shoes that is seems to be good. So, that is not the efficient use of natural resourses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
...heir money on such a paviolus commodity.To illustate that my sisters exampple is e...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r is coming from the marginal family. I dont spend my money in the influence of anyt...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
...e shopping. Secondly, advertisent is promote to people new things by giving them suc...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ch mind catching offers. As a result of this people is not completely use old thing ...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'diminished'.
Suggestion: diminished
...So, natural resourses of the country is diminish drastically. For example, my brother a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry is diminish drastically. For example, my brother always keen to spend his mone...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... better offer on th e-commerse website. As a result of that he buy a new brand new...
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Suggestion: But
... a new brand new shoes at 50 % discount.But when i saw his old nike shoes that is s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and new shoes at 50 % discount.But when i saw his old nike shoes that is seems to...
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Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ld nike shoes that is seems to be good. So, that is not the efficient use of natural res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57209302326 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70113002187 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1105070376 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2142857143 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795647566536 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309745273656 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370149340436 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617963293086 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195394569666 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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