The diagram below illustrates how carbonated drinks are manufactured.
In general, there are five stages, and water is produced entirely by machine, beginning with water disinfection, and finally packaging after consumption.
To begin with, raw water goes through a filter to make a softener and remove all chemicals in the substance. The next stage is heating evaporation and carbonation. In this stage, the liquid is pumped into the electrical heater and run through a cooling pipe. After that, carbon dioxide is mixed with the liquid to create carbonated drinks.
In the third stage of the process, carbonated water is delivered to the mixing tank by a long pipe where it is put together with coloring, syrup, and flavor. In stage four, the carbonated drink gets filtered again. Finally, water is filled into cans and plastic bottles and put into boxes before being transported by truck to the supermarket to sell and consume.
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- The diagram below shows the production of olive oil 61
- The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo 78
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activities Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports center now and how it will appearn after redevelopment 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, third, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13815789474 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75241489285 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0782690393 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930150218785 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433015597109 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427141705925 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628717641288 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438304850315 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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