You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular ski resort in Canada in three individual years
The bar chart illustrates changes in snow level in a ski resort in Canada from November to April in three consecutive years.
Overall, it snowed the least in November, while February and March saw the deepest snow level in the given period. Also noticeable is that year two snowed less compared to the remaining years.
Looking initially at November, snow depth was only around 100cm for three years. The next month recorded a slight increase in snow levels in the first and third years with a comparable amount of 150m of snow, while the second year experienced a slight decline to around 50m. An upward trend can be observed in January as the snow level rose above the 150m mark for year one and year three, and the number doubled to 100m in year two.
There was substantial growth in snowfall in the next month with snow levels ranging from 350m to 450m in three years. Figures stayed the same in March before slightly dropping in April with the exception of year two reaching its peak at nearly 470m of snow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...deepest snow level in the given period. Also noticeable is that year two snowed less...
^^^^
Line 8, column 186, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...March before slightly dropping in April with the exception of year two reaching its peak at nearly 47...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66850828729 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22751304203 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0962255645 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195425232299 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964473114413 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463310909834 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133316359317 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510898344487 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.