New parents should attend parenting classes to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Parenting is perhaps the most important responsibility we have, and mistakes and poor decisions as parents can ruin a family and a child's future. Because many young people are becoming parents and many experts says the importance of parenting classes for both fathers and mothers.
Firstly, proper parenting requires a significant amount of knowledge and dedication. A little carelessness and lack of proper information can cause severe result. For example, if a parent forgot to give medicine correct time it may put child life at risk. Many parents think they would know every thing about how to parenting their child. Those parents would benefit greatly from attending a course in which experts share their perspectives on various aspects of child nurturing and proper parenting. For example, if a new mother do not know the way of fed of her child. Which caused that her child had a digestive problem and required medical help. I believe that an good course that maintain the moral and practical form of raising children will prove important to new parents.
Secondly, now most of the families were non nuclear. Which is leading to not having a expert opinion on a particular thing which happen to their child. If grand parents were living with them which may help in any thing all take-caring, feeding and medication. It will also help in a severe situations like choking, crying annoyingly far long time and not drinking milk , the grand parents know how to over come many situations which they had faced before for raising their children.
Finally , to conclude most families were not living with grand parents so I will agree with statement that new parents should attend the parenting classes to learn how to bring up their children well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99657534247 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54869054604 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6622375565 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333798148216 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106248420576 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13665002584 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254660076683 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18971796355 0.056905535591 333% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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