This graph shows us the situation that one country's shops clousres and openings from 2011 to 2018. In general, more shops were closed and few opened in the 8 years.
In the year 2011, there were over 8000 shops opened which was the largest number of new-opened stores in these years. When it went to year 2012, the number of new stores went to 4000 which dropped most in these years. Meanwhile, the graph shows that from year 2011 to 2012, there are over and near 6000 stores closed, and the number increased to over 7000 in the year 2013 and dropped down to appoximate 6000 in the year 2014. During these two years, the number of new shops bounced up firmly from the low point 4000 to over 6000, which the number of new opened stores and closures nearly equalilzed in the year 2014. In 2015, however, there was a great drop in the number of closures which went down to less than 1000, then the number bounced back to 5000 in the year 2016 and kept on with this level of number to the year 2018. On the other hand, the number of new stores were all the same level at 4000 from 2016 to 2017 and went down to 3000 in the year 2018.
Generally, there were less stores opened these years and more shops closed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun stores is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the year 2018. Generally, there were less stores opened these years and more shop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, while, in general, all the same, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29694323144 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.8028113368 2.65546596893 68% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419213973799 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3155062798 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372762369815 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195475127622 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982225592871 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278942857641 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126349659835 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.4 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.1 10.3012195122 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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