The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA.
The table illustartes data about age, per capita income per person and percentage of people below poverty line in california, utal,florida
The initial impression from the table is that the percentage of people under 18 years old is the highest in the state of utal. In contract the population under over 60 is smallest. It ís noticeable that in the average income per person is the highest the percent age of poor people in california. Utal ranks the first in population under 18 at 28 percent. Following by california at 16 percent. On the contrary, the proportion of people over 60 in florida is the highest at 23 percent which is almost 4 times higher than that in untal. The group of people over 60 years old accounts 13 percent in california states
In term of per capita income, california is the states which highest average income per person (23000 dollars) it stading after it is florida with 22000 dollars and utal at 17000 dollars. However population below poverty line account for 16 percent, which is the largest in camparision with the other states florida and california at 9 percent and 12 percent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , florida
...e below poverty line in california, utal,florida The initial impression from the table...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...poverty line in california, utal,florida The initial impression from the table is...
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Line 2, column 615, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...accounts 13 percent in california states In term of per capita income, california...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (In) must be used with a third-person verb: 'terms'.
Suggestion: terms
...ts 13 percent in california states In term of per capita income, california is the...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'which the highest'.
Suggestion: which the highest
...capita income, california is the states which highest average income per person 23000 dollars...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...2000 dollars and utal at 17000 dollars. However population below poverty line account f...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est in camparision with the other states florida and california at 9 percent and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d california at 9 percent and 12 percent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79274611399 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60433702585 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466321243523 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3111034684 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260742851489 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115802807218 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106950449041 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24561354238 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124781694586 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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