Completing a university education is thought. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
there is a growing concern revolving around whether university graduation or practical experience is more imperative. The two given arguments entail valid reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
First and foremost, a convincing reason for the university's training system is that once the student finishes the course, they at least accommodate minimal requirements from the school, including basic concepts of the major, teamwork skill, etc, which means they are qualified to step into the working environment. another angle can be seen in the fact that while students are studying at university, there are plenty of workshops, and businesses that are searching for excel employees, therefore, the opportunities can come much easier as long as they know when to grasp them. take some renowned universities around the world like Havard or Cornell as examples, I would not put it past thousands of students to desire those schools due to their effective training systems.
On the other hand, people with a contrasting viewpoint argue that handy experience such as soft skills or internships plays a more crucial role. Obviously, in real situations, there could be countless unexpected cases in that students may not be taught at school. For example, a sale assistant, they have to deal with thousands of clients with various propensities, so only by working for a long time can they confidently tackle out-of-the-blue situations. another point that should be considered as the advantage of soft skills is independence. we generally take those skills for granted, but we forget that the more skills we gain, the more self-reliant we are and they definitely stand us in good stead down the road.
In conclusion, while many people regard graduation as more vital, others support soft skills and working experiences. From my perspective, I do see those are equally important and students can still finish their studying with flying colors and equip themselves with other skills through the Internet or extracurricular activities with a view to becoming as much well-rounded as possible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31927710843 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95473176983 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7551067318 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171245960965 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071625294674 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076848287504 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106361783495 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500842600267 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.