Nowadays, because the advent of technological devices, people easily work from anywhere by using laptop or computer. Though, it is believed that technology is not good for personal life I strongly think that it plays an important part in the development of country
There are abundant reasons suppot to my viewpoint. Firstly, technology help they save their time. Because in the metropolitan city, there are many transportation on the road in everymorning so it lead to people usually get held up in heavy traffic. Therefore, they waste too much time for moving to the company so that they feel tired when go to the company and they can not complete job in the most effective way. For example, they can use technological devices as a way to work with other in company from home or café instead of getting up ealry to go to work . Moreover, people spend this time playing sports or listening to music to get rid of stress and recharge their batteries after stressful day
Secondly, technology not only come in useful for working employees but also it gives stduents positive consequences. They access to the Internet as a way to blow off their steam after a tired day at school. Besides, technological devices that help you get instant access to relevant information. For example, when they get an trouble, students use Internet as a esiest way to express their emotion with everyone. Thus in the forresseeable future, technological devices are seen as indespensable part in their life as it brings many benefits for people as well as the development of nation
To summarize, athough working or studying at home is not as good and effective as work at company, technological devices bring many benefit for physical and mental health which cannot be ignored
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun transportation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much transportation', 'a good deal of transportation'.
Suggestion: much transportation; a good deal of transportation
...use in the metropolitan city, there are many transportation on the road in everymorning so it lead ...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...ation on the road in everymorning so it lead to people usually get held up in heavy ...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nstead of getting up ealry to go to work . Moreover, people spend this time playin...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...information. For example, when they get an trouble, students use Internet as a esi...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...et an trouble, students use Internet as a esiest way to express their emotion wit...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...to express their emotion with everyone. Thus in the forresseeable future, technologi...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...at company, technological devices bring many benefit for physical and mental health which ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93602693603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83915622531 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.7452811492 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144317826712 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608716484611 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474684914313 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101998974153 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303740688441 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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