An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?
It is true that the number of overweight children is increasing all over the country. This has affected their health and healthcare costs as they grow up. This essay will update to this issue.
Firstly, things are becoming more and more modern and as are many electronic devices evolving. It also means that many children are always glued to their the screen all the time and everywhere, especially when eating leading to an inability to control their weight. Secondly, parents are busy with work and often give money so that they can buy fast food outside, leading to absorbing too many calories and children becoming obese.
To avoid harmful problems with overweight in children. Parents need to pay attention to their children’s eating and drinking, teach them how to limit eating foods that are high in calories and fat, and instead eat more vegetables and fruits that contain a lot of fiber. In addition, children need to exercise regularly every day to control their weight and health.
In conclusion, there are many problems affecting the health of developing children. In my opinion, parents often observe the health of their children and teach them what is best for their health.
- The chart below give information about how people aged 25 34 are housed in the uk
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents What is the reason for this What problems can this cause 56
- An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs Why do you think so many children are overweight What could be done to solve this problem 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01005025126 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.455451422 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0995550496 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353129202726 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146739944407 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767871254285 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222045500357 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609095031107 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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