In this cutting edge era , technology play a vital role in human being life. It is believed by many people that technology has made their life uneasy therefore, people have not to use digital equipments and live life without technological devices. I totally disagree to this opinion and , i would argue that technology made our life more easy .
To embark with , there are various advantages to use digital equipments .Firstly , technological equipments can save people precise time and money. To explain it further, people can use mobile phone for talking with their friends and family members without geographical boundaries by using communication technology. Along with that, in the past due to lack of development in medical equipments and medicine, thousands of people die but, now because of cutting edge technology many people not suffering from fear of die. For example, in Italy, rapid development of medical science has resulted more life expectancy of Italian natives.
Furthermore, people can now use mobile phone for entertainment, learning and so on. To be more specific, technology can make easy life of human. Digital technology has made revolution this world by many useful things such as telecommunication, medical and the internet. Nowadays, artificial intelligence can perform multiple task in very less second and they can do household work with perfection. This can be more useful in automobile industry because, this industry require great amount of perfection and labour force. In other word , robots has extra ordinary features which make more easier.
To sum up , i disagree that technology made more life complex because technology saves humans time and, it also increase humans life expectancy .
- Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations Skills such as cookery dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries What are the causes of this What solutions can be offered 61
- some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicle driver take test each year to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 79
- Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many people say that universities should only be offered to young students with high marks others say that they should accept people of all ages even if they did not do well Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93018014734 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1334508553 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364267845754 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138241973529 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116279313181 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26637918525 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124497805238 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this cutting edge era , technology play a vital role in human b...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... I totally disagree to this opinion and , i would argue that technology made our ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... totally disagree to this opinion and , i would argue that technology made our li...
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... that technology made our life more easy . To embark with , there are various a...
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...e our life more easy . To embark with , there are various advantages to use dig...
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...ous advantages to use digital equipments .Firstly , technological equipments can s...
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...s advantages to use digital equipments .Firstly , technological equipments can save peo...
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...tages to use digital equipments .Firstly , technological equipments can save peopl...
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...ancy of Italian natives. Furthermore, people can now use mobile phone for ente...
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...ltiple task in very less second and they can do household work with perfection. T...
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...e useful in automobile industry because, this industry require great amount of pe...
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...rfection and labour force. In other word , robots has extra ordinary features whic...
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...res which make more easier. To sum up , i disagree that technology made more li...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... which make more easier. To sum up , i disagree that technology made more life...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...chnology saves humans time and, it also increase humans life expectancy .
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... it also increase humans life expectancy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93018014734 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1334508553 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364267845754 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138241973529 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116279313181 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26637918525 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124497805238 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.