These days, many companies want to hire employees who do their work quickly. Therefore, many people think it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. I disagree with this thought. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
First, if you work in a society like a company, you can cause a big problem if you make a mistake. Especially,if you make a mistake in something related to numbers, it is even more serious because it will be related to money. Not only that, but even if you make a mistake when you do homework at school, your score can be reduced. For instance, I did my homework almost on deadline, and then I forgot to change the font, so the teacher gave me a minus point.
Secondly, it can cause harm to people around you. If I make a mistake while doing things quickly at the company, not only me but the whole company can get damaged. Therefore, other people might leave work late too. In addition, if you make a mistake in your assignment with your friends while trying to speed up, you can get a score cut together and feel sorry for them.
Last, if a mistake occurs, it takes more time to do it again. Usually, when solving math problems, if you solve them quickly, the answer is wrong, so you have to find out where it went wrong again. Later, you can see it is just a calculation mistake, so doing it carefully is a way to reduce time. For example, when I made PPT quickly, that time I forgot to store it, so I did it again.
This is why I think slowly and make sure the best is better than quickly with some mistakes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...roblem if you make a mistake. Especially,if you make a mistake in something related...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31921824104 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31745623511 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6061994863 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300743371184 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103541553188 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174992602803 0.0737576698707 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202707545902 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152011192056 0.0645574589148 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...roblem if you make a mistake. Especially,if you make a mistake in something related...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31921824104 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31745623511 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6061994863 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300743371184 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103541553188 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174992602803 0.0737576698707 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202707545902 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152011192056 0.0645574589148 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.