In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, in several countries, many men and women are choosing to live with their parents when they finished the program of study in high school or university to find jobs. However, I believe this situation has more advantages than disadvantages.
On the one hand, when adults do not want to rent a house that can cause problems. First, their parents continue to take care of their children even though at which age they need to go to work and look after their parents. For example, still have people who do not want to find jobs and always depend on parents that make parents feel bored and pester. In addition, if all adults do the same things like that, the house owners will become employed. Finally, some people who have a house distance from their work’ place will have more difficulty in moving and will have large money for petro.
On the other hand, if people do not live with their parents, they have more convenience for themself. To begin with the relationship between parents and children, when they have more time with their parents, it is a chance to cement the relationship with each other. Second, people who do not rent a house will save money and they can use this fund to purchase good products for their parents. In addition, renting a house on the outside is threatening to females. For example, a girl who is living alone will attract attention from thieves or harassers that are risky for her.
In conclusion, the trend still has important benefits for a grown up, and it is helpful for both children as well as parents. The adults living with their parents can boost their relationship and are safe for girls.
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- In some countries more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36693376555 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522491349481 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4146884922 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336156768359 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120247523131 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843551235693 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203118832852 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588006396868 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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