Some people prefer to live in the places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Whichh do you prefer? Use specific answers or details to support your answers.
Preferences of people differ from person to person depending on the situation. In the given scenario, it is perceived that some choose to live in the place with similar climatic condition all year around while some prefer to stay within place where various weather can be experienced. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that we should reside in such place where we can enjoy varities of climate. I feel this way several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, being in a place with multiple climatic condition offer people to acknowledge about dintict weather. To be more precise, there are various climate found all over the world and living in a country where we get to enjoy more seasons of climate offer us not only the insights but also the enjoyment. To cite an example, Nepal, it is a country which consist mainly four season in a year. People living here can enjoy the different climate such as summer, winter, rainy and spring. Aditionally, when we travel to another country this assist us to adjust in whatever weather we experience there. Besides, we gain more information about the weather with practical experience.Therefore, this will be of great help for the student indulging in geography subject.
Secondly, staying in a place having same kind of weather gives the sense of monotonous. To be more clear, it is the nature of human to aquire something new always and it gets bored to live somewhere with same weather nature. I have witnessed this in my own personal experience. Last year, I went to a country whose climate is tropical throughout the year. I had to stay there for six month with hot and humid weather. At first, I enjoyed the summer however I eventually got bored of same climate for about half of the year. Furthermore, I came to the realization that how good it feels to be a citizen of a country where we can enjoy different types of weather. This sense of goodness aid us to be more energetic and enthusiastic toward our work which is not the case in a place with constant temperature. Consequently, this will make people dull and less creative.
As we can see, indeed it all depends on the personal opinion of people to live in what kind of weather nevertheless it is far welcoming to be in country where we can enjoy the climatic varieties. This not only provide us enjoyment but also advantegeuos for our educational purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...oy varities of climate. I feel this way several reason which I will explore in the subsequent ...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly the insights but also the enjoyment. To cite an example, Nepal, it is a country...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'season' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'seasons'.
Suggestion: seasons
... is a country which consist mainly four season in a year. People living here can enjoy...
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...t the weather with practical experience.Therefore, this will be of great help for the stu...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...t the year. I had to stay there for six month with hot and humid weather. At first, I...
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Line 4, column 474, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...yed the summer however I eventually got bored of same climate for about half of the year...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...e can see, indeed it all depends on the personal opinion of people to live in what kind of weath...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74401913876 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75830680856 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495215311005 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.748275534 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243501970153 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785263136447 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606633486216 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172051105225 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492020542715 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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